Cliffhanger?!?! Seriously?? Damn you! I... I have to wait for the rest now! It's bad enough I'm having to wait for things to come in the mail....

That aside, I love it like usual.

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the cliffhanger threw me off, "Let's quit the drama"
then what do you get DRAMA! love it all. hope to see more.

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On the second page, on this on at least XD, Mikey looks very heroic looking. o.o

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TESS ISN'T IN THIS ONE I AM OH SO UPSET

DON'T YOU APPRECIATE MY _GIFT_????

this whole chapter was glorious! the panels, the art, the shading, and the quality, beautiful and always top notch. these last few pages were especially great. oh my goodness Mike looks fuckin' HOOOOOT in that one panel.

i must say that all the characters really shine in this chapter, too. your earlier chapters kinda just tossed Sue in as a support character (not counting her bigger role in your first version of the cat comics) but here her personality shows well, and she fits in nicely in the group now! i wonder where McCain went though? hmmm~

overall, great job. this was an awesome chapter and i can't wait for the next one. also, paulo kissing blur will never get old. i think i will frame that panel and hang it in my living room.

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Aww..;.; That's so adorable and sad. D< I am a sap for MikexLucy. Forever. Also, the heart looks a little odd in first page. o.O;; (A little wobbily). Paulo's mouth looks odd in the first page. I think I understand what you were trying to do with him/it, but it looks like isn't a mouth and is apart of his muzzle.O.o Also the new..character dude thingey is either nosey and concerned. He's a bit creepy. Psst... Toilet stepping ftw (kidding, of course) I keep saying Also alot.. ;_; Probably because I just woke up. But anyway, I can't wait for more. (I suck at trying to give you critique I AM SORRY. ). But uhhmm..Yea. I love how you've woven the story so far. ;_; Can't wait for the next chapter.

Fffff

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I wasn't try to be nitpicky or anything, by the way. <_<;;; Like I said, I suck at giving critique. ;;

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"Great. Just great. Now I look like the huge, mighty king of GUYS WHO TALK TO POSTERS" - Bowser.

Curse you for your cliffhangers! XD

Quite simply love this. ^^

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N-NOVEMBER?! SO SOON?!?!?!?
*IS SO FULL OF GLEE AND RAINBOWS*

So, again, your shading, inking, persepctive, backgrounds, EVERYTHING, is so gooood! Congratulationsss.

Did you study a toilet with a sketchbook for the bathroom shot? : ) *brick'd*

I don't know what to tell you to improve on except adding colour if you had the time and patience. :I

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ALSO, LANKY MISHUL IS LAAAANK.Y : D

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Gahhh, two more things.

First: Maishul*
Second: The Paulo and Blur crack shall begin now. I will never forget that. ever.

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